Goalie with some post processing

Matt336Matt336 Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
edited June 5, 2010 in Sports
I was at a hockey game this weekend and snapped this one. I was bored and just started editing the image and this is what I came up with. C&C welcome!

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  • ErbemanErbeman Registered Users Posts: 926 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2010
    I like it.
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  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,940 moderator
    edited January 11, 2010
    I like the shot. Only comment is the face is a bit OE.
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  • johngjohng Registered Users Posts: 1,658 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2010
    I like it - it's different. But I'd crop down - while the affect looks cool on the goalie I'm not sure I like so much of the dead space in the upper right - but I'd probably make the same comment if you hadn't changed the colors :D
  • j-boj-bo Registered Users Posts: 313 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2010
    johng wrote:
    I like it - it's different. But I'd crop down - while the affect looks cool on the goalie I'm not sure I like so much of the dead space in the upper right - but I'd probably make the same comment if you hadn't changed the colors :D

    Same for me, a crop down would make it better and it's a bit too green overall for my tastes.
  • DblDbl Registered Users Posts: 230 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2010
    Hello from a UND grad class of 82'. I like the processing but would tone down the whites just a bit. The Sioux colors are white and green so I am not bothered by the green overall tint! You have the perfect start to a poster here. I would definitely use the space you have to add graphics! Cropping the dead space leaves you too little space under the player, you end up almost square.
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  • Racerx7734Racerx7734 Registered Users Posts: 69 Big grins
    edited January 11, 2010
    I like it
    I think it's great, I like lots of color and exposure...looks gritty.

    Right up my alley....
  • Mike JMike J Registered Users Posts: 1,029 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2010
    johng wrote:
    I like it - it's different. But I'd crop down - while the affect looks cool on the goalie I'm not sure I like so much of the dead space in the upper right - but I'd probably make the same comment if you hadn't changed the colors :D

    +1 on the tighter crop. To me the focus in this should be on his eye - not the space to the right and upper-right.
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  • Matt336Matt336 Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2010
    Cropped and fixed the face. How about now?ne_nau.gif

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  • Gary Peterson PhotographyGary Peterson Photography Registered Users Posts: 261 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2010
    This rocks...
    I liked the first one as it was..looked a bit edgier.




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  • Mike JMike J Registered Users Posts: 1,029 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2010
    I like the crop of the 2nd but agree with Gary about the edgier look of the 1st one.
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  • JeffCanonJeffCanon Registered Users Posts: 97 Big grins
    edited January 13, 2010
    I think the crop helped (but a little loser would likely be OK too), IMO it made the player’s face the main subject in the frame, in the original my eye where being drawn to the pad/glove (don’t the hockey name), would still like to see some work done to the blowout area on pad/glove
  • ErbemanErbeman Registered Users Posts: 926 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2010
    I liked it as it was as well. Looked my like art to me. This is a simple case of so many different opinions, and there is no right or wrong way to do things. I say, it's your pic, do with how you please.
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  • Mike JMike J Registered Users Posts: 1,029 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2010
    Erbeman wrote:
    I liked it as it was as well. Looked my like art to me. This is a simple case of so many different opinions, and there is no right or wrong way to do things. I say, it's your pic, do with how you please.
    15524779-Ti.gif That's what makes this so fascinating - all of the different opinions. In the end, it is your picture though and you need to make it please you - not us. What version do you like?
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  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,940 moderator
    edited January 13, 2010
    i like the first crop. Face looks better in the second but I agree that may have made it less edgy looking.
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  • timcallowtimcallow Registered Users Posts: 42 Big grins
    edited January 17, 2010
    I like the edgier look of the first take, like someone said, a good start for a poster, fix the face on the first one, add in the team logo, and you have a poster.
  • TheCheeseheadTheCheesehead Registered Users Posts: 249 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    Goalie with some post processing
    Great shot of Eids Matt! Love it!
  • Matt336Matt336 Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    Great shot of Eids Matt! Love it!

    Thanks!:D I can't wait for the season to start in October. I have a few new ideas I want to try.
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