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jedgar8585
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I'm looking for feed back as to how and improve pictures like this one. I'm new to DSLR photography and I'm eager to learn! I'm using an Olympus Evolt E-300. The settings were 150mm, f22, 1/8 sec shutter and ISO 100. I cropped this image to 640 x 480.
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I moved the white point in a little, and then added contrast by pulling the curve, qand steepening it as well.
I was going to sharpen as well, but noticed a BUNCH of JPEG artifacts in the center of the pic.
Still 30 seconds in Photoshop, and a lot more 'pop'.
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Small apertures like f/22 give you a wider field of view, but many mistake that with sharper pictures, and that is not the case. It is a trade off between greater DOF and diffraction blurring. The sweet spot of the lens is the point where diffraction blurring (small aperture induced) is at it smallest and aberrations (wide aperture induced) are at their smallest.
Were you using a tripod? You should. Even with a fast shutter speed, you should use a tripod for low light photography
Did you auto focus or manual focus? Astro photography is notoriously difficult to autofocus on. So you may have to manually focus on infinity to get critical sharpness.
And finally, with all that addressed, using unsharp mask (USM) will get the last bit of sharpness in the image to finish it off.
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Some times I get lucky and when that happens I show the results here: http://www.xo-studios.com
Thanks for the feedback. Much to learn!
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It is a method of increasing the apparent sharpness of a photo. It takes a little time to get used to the settings, but the results are very pleasing when done right.
Some info on USM can be had here:
http://www.sonycams.com/more.php?id=38_0_1_0_M
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I'm confused: you adjust your focus between the edge or center of an object 385,000km away? Wouldn't you set all camera lenses to focus on infinity?
oscillate back and forth for best contrast/focus. If not, the lens would just slam against the stops
at infinity. So if in manual turn to infinity and back off some till best focus.
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XO,
Mark Twain
Some times I get lucky and when that happens I show the results here: http://www.xo-studios.com
How much was this image cropped?? A 150mm lens is a very short focal length to hope to capture lunar detail with. I am not sure of the exact comparison between 35mm and the Evolt system, but this must be a significant crop. What percentage of the camera's sensor was covered by the Moons surface area? And what was your ISO?
The moon is a sunlit object and needs to be exposed manually at appropriate f stop and shutter speeds for daylight lit subjects. The following moon image was shot with a 1DMkll at f16 1/200th sec ISO 200. Note those settings - sunny 16 rule - f16 1/ISO
800mm lens ( 400mm+2x) slightly cropped - tripod mounted AF point actuated on moons image edge
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Thanks - that's very good to know. Do all of the 4/3s system lenses keep this same relationship to standard 35mm lenses then? Effectively 2x as long??
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