Bejamin,
I noticed your numbers the other day and now you've over 8,000--that's fantastic.
As for your shot. I like it. It tells a story for sure, you are also up close to the action which is key. My only nit is that it's slightly soft, even so I think it works.
I like the expression on the kid's face. I can practically hear him argue his point of view.
I also notice that you are shooting from behind glass, I see the reflection of leaves on the bottom. This does not bother me at all--but I don't know how the judges will feel. I think it's a good example of a PJ shot. Can you maybe work the contrast a bit?
Bejamin,
I noticed your numbers the other day and now you've over 8,000--that's fantastic.
As for your shot. I like it. It tells a story for sure, you are also up close to the action which is key. My only nit is that it's slightly soft, even so I think it works.
I like the expression on the kid's face. I can practically hear him argue his point of view.
I also notice that you are shooting from behind glass, I see the reflection of leaves on the bottom. This does not bother me at all--but I don't know how the judges will feel. I think it's a good example of a PJ shot. Can you maybe work the contrast a bit?
Hey Liz
Thanks for the critique.
I agree with most if not all your comments.
May stick it in Street, let it get beat up there
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I noticed your numbers the other day and now you've over 8,000--that's fantastic.
As for your shot. I like it. It tells a story for sure, you are also up close to the action which is key. My only nit is that it's slightly soft, even so I think it works.
I like the expression on the kid's face. I can practically hear him argue his point of view.
I also notice that you are shooting from behind glass, I see the reflection of leaves on the bottom. This does not bother me at all--but I don't know how the judges will feel. I think it's a good example of a PJ shot. Can you maybe work the contrast a bit?
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Hey Liz
Thanks for the critique.
I agree with most if not all your comments.
May stick it in Street, let it get beat up there
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