dss42 - what do you think?

liflander

i was dropping off a co-worker at the airport on saturday morning, and these guys were cleaning windows. i asked if they minded me taking photos, they didn't, and i snapped away, until the cop asked me to move on!!

i like the comp, but its no too evocative for me.

any feedback appreciated.

cheers,
mark;)

anonymouscuban

Good but the angle bothers me. Might just be me though.

lizzard_nyc

Liflander,
I'm glad you are tackling this challenge it's definately not an easy one, not that any are, but this one really requires most to get outside their comfort zone. On to your shot.

The tilt bothers me, especially for this challenge and as you said "not evocative", just two guys cleaning windows .

Also I'd hold off on asking people to take their picture, they are usually not themselves after that and are putting on a show for the camera or the discomfort comes through. You might miss some genuine interactions.

liflander

Thanks for the helpful comments. Back to the drawing board!