Welcome to Dgrin. Looks like it was a gloomy day like we have been having here CA to often lately. If you give it some adjustment to bring up the contrast a little it would give it a little more life. Looks like the focus and exposure are good.
Good capture but I would have framed/cropped it differently. Your subject is looking to the left and you palced it in frame left with lots of dead space to its right. I would have placed it in the first thrid of frame right and gave it more space to its left.
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Nice shot and PP but I agree with the other posters, it needs a little more contrast and re-framing/composing with the dead space on the left, where the subject is looking towards.
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