DSS #43 No title yet.

Aspecto5

Ok, so this isn't my most comfortable moment, but that's a part of photography in my mind. So if anyone has any feedback for making this image stronger, or for a title, I'd appreciate the C&C. Thanks in advance.

MarkR

Sunbathing.

Halite

MarkR wrote:

Sunbathing.

First word that came to mind for me as well.

tinamarie52

Awww...I loved the expectant Mom with the crib.

Are you holding the camera remote in your right hand? It's the only dark spot in the photo and I got drawn to it.

I do love the window light. I don't know why, but "California Dreaming" came to mind.

Chris

Aspecto5

Yeah, that's my remote. I'll be taking care of that tonite. Just want to make sure this is theme worthy.

VisualXpressions

Aspecto5 wrote:

Yeah, that's my remote. I'll be taking care of that tonite. Just want to make sure this is theme worthy.

very much so...

liflander

Nice shot! I like the light. Just for kicks, why not try a crop just below your shoulders, so that you can't see any of the tub. That would take it out of context, and make it dreamy and other-worldly!
Mark

Aspecto5

K, so I fixed up the remote and a friend of mine came up with a title for me, Rays of Solitude. Thanks for the feedback everyone.

BinaryFx

Aspecto5, I really like your shot - the idea, execution, composition, how you captured the dream-like diffuse light. Very creative! And I like your title!


Regards,

Stephen Marsh

http://members.ozemail.com.au/~binaryfx/
http://prepression.blogspot.com/

lizzard_nyc

oh man!
I feel myself relaxing just looking at this shot. Great interpetation on theme.

Aspecto5

lizzard_nyc wrote:

oh man!
I feel myself relaxing just looking at this shot. Great interpetation on theme.

Thanks Stephen and Liz. Here's hopin the judges feel the same way!