Impressionable

RoadkillRoadkill Registered Users Posts: 494 Major grins
edited February 9, 2010 in Street and Documentary
Thought I would try a hand at PJ and drop a shot in for critique.



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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited February 9, 2010
    Roadkill wrote:
    Thought I would try a hand at PJ and drop a shot in for critique.

    First, I'd try a square crop -
    It's intriquing, and the composition takes it a bit beyond the cell phone camera cliche. But I'm not sure where it takes it - keep shooting! :D
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  • RoadkillRoadkill Registered Users Posts: 494 Major grins
    edited February 9, 2010
    Thanks, that crop is better, I only wish I had included some of the foreground girls fishnet stockings in this shot, I think it would have had better impact.
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