Snow Tracks

DonRicklin

C&C welcome,

Don

schmoo

Hi Don! I think I prefer the first because it's more abstract. The crossing lines are pretty awesome, as is the light hitting the sticks themselves. Just awesome light all-around

DonRicklin

schmoo wrote:

Hi Don! I think I prefer the first because it's more abstract. The crossing lines are pretty awesome, as is the light hitting the sticks themselves. Just awesome light all-around

Thanks for looking schmoo. Yeah, the second is a more classic comp.

Don

topcat374

I agree. Prefer the first - really eyecatching.

Wonder if the second one would look better if the picture was cropped to exclude the hill in the background. Would there be more impact if the tracks led straight off the edge of the picture?

DonRicklin

topcat374 wrote:

I agree. Prefer the first - really eyecatching.

Wonder if the second one would look better if the picture was cropped to exclude the hill in the background. Would there be more impact if the tracks led straight off the edge of the picture?

Thanks for looking. I take a look at your suggestion.

Don

DonRicklin

Based on topcat374's suggestion here is a cropped version of #2:



Don

Nihilation

The cropped version leads my eyes to making laps all over the photo and I like it

schmoo

I LOVE the cropped version of the second. It doesn't even look like the same photo!

DonRicklin

WHy thank you!

Don

thapamd

Love the cropped version of the 2nd shot...so simple and sweet!

topcat374

#2 looks great after crop:) Thanks for trying the idea out