D edited C&C please

RacinRandyRacinRandy Registered Users Posts: 187 Major grins
edited February 9, 2010 in People
A week or so ago I had a chance to spend some time shooting a friend(It's okay I am a terrible shot:wink).

Well i finally got back to take a shot at some PP. I'll show the before and after. Let me know what you think.

Before(sooc)

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After (Piknik)

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I normally use PSE7 so Piknik was a bit different.

Randy
Randy

EOS Rebel XS Digital/ EOS 7D/ EOS 6D
50mm f1.8/ Tamron 70-200 f2.8 is/ 24-105 f4L
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  • pkhonapkhona Registered Users Posts: 21 Big grins
    edited February 9, 2010
    RacinRandy wrote:
    A week or so ago I had a chance to spend some time shooting a friend(It's okay I am a terrible shotmwink.gif).

    Well i finally got back to take a shot at some PP. I'll show the before and after. Let me know what you think.

    Before(sooc)

    777956097_75WD4-M.jpg

    After (Piknik)

    784335788_BwLYG-M.jpg

    I normally use PSE7 so Piknik was a bit different.

    Randy


    I like the orton effect that you gave after PP, looks great removes skin blemishes and gives nice glow to entire picture. Interestingly enough blur section in her lower part of body is catching more attention than the eye.. is is possible not to blur lower portion of body and sharpen the eyes or whiten them further ?
    Olympus E520
  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited February 9, 2010
    doesn't work for me. The fake bokeh is really fake. The crop now makes the teddy bear indiscernable. The face is better but her expression is killing the whole shot for me.
    D700, D600
    14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
    85 and 50 1.4
    45 PC and sb910 x2
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  • GringriffGringriff Registered Users Posts: 340 Major grins
    edited February 9, 2010
    I like the effects on the face, hair and background. I think it is too much on her left sleeve, chest, left arm, and I agree that I like the teddy bear in the shot better than the crop.

    It would be nice to see how it looks with those areas closer to the original or with just a very small amount of adjustments.

    Andy
    Andy
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    Canon 7D, 70-200mm L, 50 and 85 primes, Tamron 17-50, 28-135
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