DSS#44....Seeking feedback please!

ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
edited February 15, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
These are my first attempts, any of them challenge worthy? I plan on shooting more, but curious if these could be possible contenders.
Any and all feedback would be very helpful!

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Thanks for looking!
Karin


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  • DeeCajunDeeCajun Registered Users Posts: 515 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    wow they are really precious...

    Of these *I* like #2, something about the light in the window ...

    I'm no expert but it jumped out at me.
  • DsrtVWDsrtVW Registered Users Posts: 1,991 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    I do not know if a reshoot is possible. All especailly 3 & 4 would have been much better if you could have got even lower angle to include more window not cutting them in half. Great subject for all of them
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  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    Try square cropping #4 to lose the right side. Now the sitting girl becomes the attention grabber.
  • JAGJAG Super Moderators Posts: 9,088 moderator
    edited February 14, 2010
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    A square crop of the girl sitting and the one next to her will make this a stronger composition on #4. It has lots of possiblities. I would also bump the contrast just a bit and make the darks darker. thumb.gif
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    I agree with JAG. Darker darks.

    #4 or #2.

    Get lower to get more contrast.
  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    Thanks everyone for your feedback and suggestions. I can reshoot on Saturday, don't know that I can get lower though, will have to see. As for the suggestions for cropping and darkening #4, I have given that a try...does this look any better?

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    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    Th crop really strengthens that sweet photo.

    Virginia
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  • richterslrichtersl Registered Users Posts: 3,322 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2010
    Flyinggina wrote:
    Th crop really strengthens that sweet photo.

    Virginia

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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited February 15, 2010
    Flyinggina wrote:
    Th crop really strengthens that sweet photo.

    Virginia

    Thanks Virginia and Linda:D
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
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