#44 - First Attempt

KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
edited February 19, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
Thoughts?

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Thanks in advance! :D
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited February 18, 2010
    It fits the theme, but unfortunately isn't very dramatic, and the sunflare might turn some people off.

    To salvage it in Post Processing I would try:
    * 10:4 vertical crop, effectively cutting out the guy on the right
    * Bring up the blacks using levels
    * Using "selective color" adjustment layer, I'd make that sky look a little more intense

    Just my 2 cents. Let me know if you need help with any of the PP stuff. That being said, there is still a weekend left, I'd try to go out and shoot some more.
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  • DsrtVWDsrtVW Registered Users Posts: 1,991 Major grins
    edited February 19, 2010
    There was another post where the flare did bother me, but this one is kind of interesting. You have the three in silhouette and the flare going down and illuminating the fourth guy.
    Overall it could be a little stronger but it does meet the challenge.
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  • KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited February 19, 2010
    I do have a different shot that has a little more going on with the guys... I'll work on it with your suggestions and post that later today.

    I'll be out shooting again this morning, so I'll give it another try or two.

    Thanks for the comments!
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