44 - C&C on a couple of ideas please

Do any of these work? Where can I improve?
I had a chance to pick up my camera at last. The colorful silhouettes were taken in our 3D immersion virtual environment. It's a cubre that runs 3D programming for teaching and research. I had them run the mono version of a teaching module instead of the 3D version so that I could get clean images. What do you think?
EDIT: I took your suggestions and cropped, masked (a new tool for me) and brightened. I llike it better. Thanks for the suggestions. What do you think?
I actually have time to wander around with my camera this weekend, so would love some input. I found shooting silhouettes harder than I thought they would be!
Chris
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I had a chance to pick up my camera at last. The colorful silhouettes were taken in our 3D immersion virtual environment. It's a cubre that runs 3D programming for teaching and research. I had them run the mono version of a teaching module instead of the 3D version so that I could get clean images. What do you think?
EDIT: I took your suggestions and cropped, masked (a new tool for me) and brightened. I llike it better. Thanks for the suggestions. What do you think?
I actually have time to wander around with my camera this weekend, so would love some input. I found shooting silhouettes harder than I thought they would be!
Chris
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I hadn't used layer masks before....so thanks for pushing me to pick up a new tool.
The edited image is now shown as #3. If you could give me feedback, I'd appreciate it.
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