#45 Early attepts - c&c please

AndMan

Decided to walk through town to see what (if anything) I could catch for this challenge.

Do any of these work?

#1


#2


#3


#4 Morning Coffee


#5


#6 Mentor / Outcast


Thanks for looking

WhatSheSaw

I think they all fit the theme - together, yet apart. I like #4 and #5 best. Try posting these in the PJ forum. I think you'll get some really good feedback there.

AndMan

WhatSheSaw wrote:

I think they all fit the theme - together, yet apart. I like #4 and #5 best. Try posting these in the PJ forum. I think you'll get some really good feedback there.

Thanks for the feedback and suggestion. I've already posted them in PJ/street and get the feeling I may have over-reached a tad.

gpssue

#4
I like your #4 photo best because of the look on the ladies face...

JerryBarton

I like #4 - but perhaps it needs some work to emphasize the two at the table. My eye wandered around the picture until I found the two people at the table. Just a thought.