Exposure looks pretty good a hot spot on the top one and a slight hot spot on the bottom one. Not bad for a black and white bird.
Next opportunity try to get a lower angle and don't crop quite so tight.
The first one, maybe don't shoot when they are stacked one behind the other like that. You had a very nice shot of the front bird and the back one does not add to the shot, it is more of a distraction.
These are nicely done photos. It is easy to find something to critique with pretty much any photo so please take mine as constructive, info to grow on for the next time.
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Seriously the first one has the "wow" factor all over it and a perfect caption too!
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Next opportunity try to get a lower angle and don't crop quite so tight.
The first one, maybe don't shoot when they are stacked one behind the other like that. You had a very nice shot of the front bird and the back one does not add to the shot, it is more of a distraction.
These are nicely done photos. It is easy to find something to critique with pretty much any photo so please take mine as constructive, info to grow on for the next time.
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That would have been very sweet. Do you think I should go back for a re-shoot?
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Thanks Harry. I finally have a good wildlife preserve within a 90 minute drive of me.
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