#45 last ditch effort - c&c please

AndMan

Since none of my previous attempts felt up to the challenge I went out yesterday to see if I could do better.

So the question is are any of these theme worthy?
All c&c greatly appreciated.

#1 "Niched" or "Worthy of Rememberance" v1


#2 "Niched" or "Worthy of Rememberance" v2


#3 A Part of a Grand Design


#4 Monumental Intent


#5 Designed for Posterity


#6 "18th Century Garden"


#7 Teamwork

WhatSheSaw

All great shots and I see where you are going with them. I think Teamwork really speaks to the theme.

Velvet-Art

Out of them all, #7 is more on-theme to my eyes anyway, but maybe a closer crop would look good, or at the least clone out the reed.


Tim

BinaryFx

I like #3 for being "apart" (I am also a sucker for mirrored symmetry of objects in a scene), perhaps some fill light to shadow/highlight to open up the shadows on the right hand building.


Stephen Marsh

http://members.ozemail.com.au/~binaryfx/
http://prepression.blogspot.com/

AndMan

WhatSheSaw wrote:

All great shots and I see where you are going with them. I think Teamwork really speaks to the theme.

Thanks for taking the time to provide your input I appreciate it.

AndMan

Velvet-Art wrote:

Out of them all, #7 is more on-theme to my eyes anyway, but maybe a closer crop would look good, or at the least clone out the reed.


Tim

Thanks for the suggestions Tim, I'll certainly give them a try.

AndMan

BinaryFx wrote:

I like #3 for being "apart" (I am also a sucker for mirrored symmetry of objects in a scene), perhaps some fill light to shadow/highlight to open up the shadows on the right hand building.


Stephen Marsh

http://members.ozemail.com.au/~binaryfx/
http://prepression.blogspot.com/

Thanks for the feedback Stephen, I did add some fill to the rh building but I'll see if I can get more.

VisualXpressions

teamwork, definitely teamwork with some cropping and cloning out the cat tail.

AndMan

VisualXpressions wrote:

teamwork, definitely teamwork with some cropping and cloning out the cat tail.

Thanks for the feedback Winston.

AndMan

Two crop variations of Teamwork

#8 crop 1


#9 crop 2

bf2015

#9 Crop 2. Great shot for this challenge!

tinamarie52

I like #9 crop 2. What a long journey you've taken for this challenge!

I think you've arrived.

Chris

mr peas

I like the canoeing shot as well. I say it won't matter where you crop , but if you can show more sky, I say do that!

AndMan

bf2015 wrote:

#9 Crop 2. Great shot for this challenge!

Thanks for the feedback Brian.

AndMan

tinamarie52 wrote:

I like #9 crop 2. What a long journey you've taken for this challenge!

I think you've arrived.

Chris

Thanks for the feedback Chris.
I'm not so sure it was a journey, more a mad scramble for ideas & inspiration.

AndMan

mr peas wrote:

I like the canoeing shot as well. I say it won't matter where you crop , but if you can show more sky, I say do that!

Thanks for the feedback Joel.

mr peas

AndMan wrote:

Thanks for the feedback Joel.

DO IT