I am proud of these!

Fstoplife

These are a few from my first paid shoot!! I think they came out awesome!!! What do you think?

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2. Love this pic!! I love the clashing patterns and the color, the only thing is next time I have to make the pattern go all the way down beneath her, but for now it's ok and her mom called me this morning to thank me again, she loves them!!



3.This is by far my favorite!


Thanks for looking!!

Gina

kidzmom

Just wonderful!!! Loved seeing these! Great work!

Fstoplife

Thank you!! I had so much fun!!

gecko0

Nice work! Just a few things I noticed were the cropping is fairly tight (cutting off tiny bits of the dress, etc). In #1, her black shoes are lost in the bottom, so her feet look cut off a bit. Minor issues and I'm sure most will not notice that at all. Congrats on your first paid shoot!!


edit: just looked at #1 again...is that just thick carpet and she is barefoot? Then ignore my shoe comment. lol

Fstoplife

Thanks for commenting!!

I know it's closely cropped but it just happened when I was adjusting, she turned towards me and I snapped and on the last one she is barefoot on a soft Teddy bear material. Maybe next time I will use a harder material this way it's easier to see. Thank you for the critique! I appreciate it

Mitchell

That last one is great. Well done!

goldilocksandmy3bears

cute shots!! I love the picture frame one too!! what kind of pp did you do on these?? looks kinda vintagey <-- is that a word? lol
Court

Fstoplife

Thank you!! Lol I think her face to me was so vintagey I stole your word she was so pretty and classical if that makes sense.

Scott_Quier

The last one is the best of the lot. Consider reversing the de-sat .... de-sat the entire photo and then bring back the color for the inside of the frame. I think this would make a much more effective portrait.

zoomer

Hold your head high, these are well done.
As others said they feel just a tad tight and maybe try to take them at your subjects eye level a bit more.
Overall very well done.

Fstoplife

Thank you!! I do agree the second one is too tight. Next time I am going to try to set the actual shot up. I love the clashing patterns though.

I will try the destaurating everything but the inside of the frame, but I Just think the actual frame area is too small it might not work, but I am going to give it a go and see what happens. Thanks for the suggestion!!