#7 - First trial

travelways

I just thought to do a trial on the #7



Is it something that can work for this mega or should I wait for a better inspiration? :scratch

Thank you for looking

MarkR

photo-bug wrote:

I just thought to do a trial on the #7



Is it something that can work for this mega or should I wait for a better inspiration?

Thank you for looking

I think it captures the dreaminess of the poet's imagined Innisfree, but there's something awkward to me about the bird's stance.

richtersl

The light on the bird's chest looks nice. But the photo in general lacks "wow factor". I know you can do better.

Velvet-Art

As others have said, this is not as strong as your usual shots. My eye keeps being drawn to the two stalks of grass (?) sticking up into the sky too.

Tim

travelways

Thank you so much - I would have made the same comments on this photo - if it was not mine

My eye keeps being drawn to the two stalks of grass (?) sticking up into the sky too.

Those are actually palm trees - I'm in Mexico, where the end of the winter is very dry

I'll try to find a nicer lake

Thank you again for the comments and suggestions

morgan20

Incredible pic. My suggestion is put your name in white - red ruins it.

photo-bug wrote:

I just thought to do a trial on the #7



Is it something that can work for this mega or should I wait for a better inspiration?

Thank you for looking