It's been a while: stepping back in for DSS#47 (take 1)

silversx80

Things got pretty busy for a while (got married this past weekend), but hopefully I'll have more time for these challenges now (the highlight of every two weeks).

Here are two tries from an impromptu trip to the beach yesterday.

1) Could you start walking already?




- OR -


2) The end of a long walk on the beach




Thanks for looking, C&C is appreciated.

DeuceFour

I can see where your going with these.. but without the title to the images I would never see the begining or ending to anything in the photos. Not quite sure they fit the theme strongly enough.

AndMan

First off, congrats on getting married .
I have to agree that I'm not sure these are strong enough on the theme, perhaps if you could show the footprints starting "out of nowhere" it may be stronger. Not sure how you'd do that without a crane but I hope you can "see" what I mean.

DsrtVW

Best Wishes to you and the better half. I understand where you are going but I dont feel much emotion in these. But I am at a loss right now to give you reasons, too tired from the all the walking at the trade show today.
Glad to see you back in the game

silversx80

Thanks for the honesty, all. I have a few more ideas that I'll hopefully get to try out.