Older shots please C&C

crazy7photography

there are two I really like:


and this one:

Please let me know what you think?

Kinkajou

I like the second one a lot. The only tiny tiny nitpick I have with it is that the window is not perfectly vertical. It looks like a tough situation because the ground probably isn't perfectly level, so you kind of have to choose which one to go with for your alignment... but I think I'd go with the window.

The light on the first one seems to be a bit hot and blows out some of the detail. Great job capturing her eyes and hair, though.

adbsgicom

First one I can still see detail in the highlights, but just barely. I'd stop it down 1/3, but you may want the higher highlights on the face.

Like the second one. Only thing I'd suggest is that there is some awning shadow above and some of the next window to the right. Like to composition!

Qarik

I like both..nice work. The 1st one is a bit hot but in this case I think it still works..artistic call.