Lonely flower

Mr. QuietMr. Quiet Registered Users Posts: 1,047 Major grins
edited March 25, 2010 in Other Cool Shots
Got this While at a flower park today. Added shadows and got this.

PLEASE CRITIQUE
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PLEASE CRITIQUE

What do you guys and gals think?
If you work at something hard enough, you WILL achieve your goal. "Me"

D200
NIKKOR 50mm f/1.4 D
Tamron SP AF90mm f/2.8 Di 1:1


Welcome to my NEW website!

Mr. Christoferson

Comments

  • gecko0gecko0 Registered Users Posts: 383 Major grins
    edited March 25, 2010
    I like the overall feel of it. I think this one is hard to tweak, due to the delicate balance of light/dark. My two monitors here (very uncalibrated work pc) look drastically different between the two.

    IMO, I'd go with a bit more brightness on the flower and eliminate some of the empty space below it. Maybe tone down or remove the bright spot above the flower...kind of distracting.

    .02
    Canon 7D and some stuff that sticks on the end of it.
  • Mr. QuietMr. Quiet Registered Users Posts: 1,047 Major grins
    edited March 25, 2010
    I should have when with my instinct. The flower was brighter in the first version...
    If you work at something hard enough, you WILL achieve your goal. "Me"

    D200
    NIKKOR 50mm f/1.4 D
    Tamron SP AF90mm f/2.8 Di 1:1


    Welcome to my NEW website!

    Mr. Christoferson
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