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Z6IZ6I Registered Users Posts: 136 Major grins
edited March 27, 2010 in People
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  • Wil DavisWil Davis Registered Users Posts: 1,692 Major grins
    edited March 27, 2010
    Very pretty girl!

    #1 is v. nice, although the head-gear looks very '60s - nice tones; focus is just about perfect, as is the DOF thumb.gif

    #2 is a bit too central for my taste, but I'm not sure what the intention is/was and it's difficult to judge from only two pictures.

    I like the idea of the frame within a frame.

    Her expression is identical in both pics.

    BTW - Welcome to DGPF!

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  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited March 27, 2010
    Welcome Robert. Both photos are good. Nothing wrong with them but at the same time lack attention grab. The 2nd would benefit from cropping (to your desire) putter her face somewhere other than in the middle of the photo. As it looks now, the focus seems to be on the window framing rather than your senior.
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  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited March 27, 2010
    Like 1 the best, straight from the side is not the most flattering angle and looks like maybe you caught her coming in or out of a blink.
    Did you whiten her eyes in this one?

    Second one needs a tighter crop, she is fighting for attention with the frame, nice idea.

    Not bad overall.
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