Strong Moonlight On Clouds...This Ok?

DaddyODaddyO Registered Users Posts: 4,466 Major grins
edited April 6, 2010 in Other Cool Shots
Worked this up from a night photo... I was good with it for as much as I pressed it...
Where did I miss here or did I miss that far?
Big crop. Soft too much?
Would be way nice to know your thoughts. Thx, Michael. :D
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Better with moon in like this? :D
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Michael

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,955 moderator
    edited April 5, 2010
    DaddyO wrote:
    Worked this up from a night photo... I was good with it for as much as I pressed it...
    Where did I miss here or did I miss that far?
    Big crop. Soft too much?
    Would be way nice to know your thoughts. Thx, Michael. :D

    I really like the clouds. I realize that the pic is not about the moon but I'm not so sure about the lack of detail there. headscratch.gif
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  • DaddyODaddyO Registered Users Posts: 4,466 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2010
    Richard wrote:
    I really like the clouds. I realize that the pic is not about the moon but I'm not so sure about the lack of detail there. headscratch.gif
    ok, really good thoughts... thx's Richard. :-)
    maybe i can figure something in that area to get it more right somehow.
    a yellowish moon diffused maybe? :D blend it out and force it to work. headscratch.gif
    Michael
  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,323 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2010
    Hey Michael,

    You try stuff that I don't have enough talent nor expertise to try, therefore, it's sometimes hard for me to offer any meaningful critique. I can say I agree with Richard in that I'd like to see some definition to the moon to confirm that it's actually the moon. That's what someone would assume but the picture would have more impact if that were a known instead of an assumption.

    I do like the shot.

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • DaddyODaddyO Registered Users Posts: 4,466 Major grins
    edited April 5, 2010
    Thanks Tom. :D My stuff wouldn't progress well without feedback like
    I'm getting.
    Michael
  • DaddyODaddyO Registered Users Posts: 4,466 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2010
    Better With This Moon In?
    Better With This Moon In? :D
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    Michael
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,955 moderator
    edited April 6, 2010
    DaddyO wrote:
    Better With This Moon In? :D
    Yes, that's much better. clap.gif I would make the brightest part of the moon at least as bright as the brightest patch of the clouds. But don't lose the detail.
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  • DaddyODaddyO Registered Users Posts: 4,466 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2010
    Richard wrote:
    Yes, that's much better. clap.gif I would make the brightest part of the moon at least as bright as the brightest patch of the clouds. But don't lose the detail.
    :D Have you noticed yet that I am fighting the white moon / usual old moon?
    Its pretty much the reason I had a no detail moon at the start. So with
    resistance being futile, I will make the final leap then. :D:D:D
    Michael
  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,323 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2010
    It's all subjective but I think that's a huge improvement.clap.gif You have to pick your battles better.:D :D

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • AzzaroAzzaro Registered Users Posts: 5,643 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2010
    Hi Michael ....... That second picture is really well doneclap.gif azzro
  • DogdotsDogdots Registered Users Posts: 8,795 Major grins
    edited April 6, 2010
    The clouds in this photo are just beautiful. To me...you don't even need a moon in the shot.
    Mary
    www.Dogdotsphotography.com
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