#48 First trial

travelways

Please tell me what do you think. - will this image work for the current challenge?



Thank you,

pyroPrints.com

photo-bug wrote:

Please tell me what do you think. - will this image work for the current challenge?

Thank you,

on theme, yeah, but visually

i think you can do better

travelways

pyroPrints.com wrote:

on theme, yeah, but visually

i think you can do better

Thank you Pyro - soo, you don't like it...

I know I can do other things, but I personally like this one - what's wrong with it?

JAG

took me some time to figure out what it is. I think more wow factor is needed. JMO. Great abstract though!

travelways

JAG wrote:

took me some time to figure out what it is. I think more wow factor is needed. JMO. Great abstract though!

"Abstract"??? Hm... I see...

I think that because I knew the subject, I thought it was obvious for the others too -
- so it is not clear that there is a spoon in a jar of marmalade

OK, I'll look for another shot in the series and If not, I'll do something else

Thank you

travelways

I had some other trials here, but I realized they were not good, so I deleted them

I just made another trial with a different subject

#2



Is this any good?

Thank you for looking

TLVoDra

I really like the marmalade shot...what if you had more light behind the jar to make the orange pop?

JAG

oh I love the chair!

travelways

TLVoDra wrote:

I really like the marmalade shot...what if you had more light behind the jar to make the orange pop?

Thank you - I can try

travelways

JAG wrote:

oh I love the chair!

Thank you Joyce

I think I'll try it again today with another type of filter...