Another try at #48, any thoughts?

TLVoDra

Here's another shot I tried....think it's too dark??

AndMan

TLVoDra wrote:

Here's another shot I tried....think it's too dark??

I agree, try it again with a much stronger light source.
What did you use or is it a pinhole shot?

TLVoDra

handheld shot, lensbaby + stacked macros

TLVoDra

Painting with Light and Pinholes
Here's one with more light, shot through a square glass vase. I used a homemade LED ring light to "paint" the light with a 10 second shutter. Any thoughts?

DsrtVW

First one to dark. Second one I would like more if it were cropped tighter removing excess gray from along the top.

TLVoDra

DsrtVW wrote:

First one to dark. Second one I would like more if it were cropped tighter removing excess gray from along the top.

Thank you for your feedback. It's always appreciated. I am here to learn...and am floored by the quality of photos I see on this site and the willingness of folks to take time to give comments/feedback.

Practice, feedback, more practice, more feedback.

Such a newbie,
Tammy