the pigeon

fraincsfraincs Registered Users Posts: 126 Major grins
edited August 13, 2005 in Landscapes
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comments, suggestions, should i ''clean'' the concrete yelrotflmao.gif

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  • burkeburke Registered Users Posts: 131 Major grins
    edited August 13, 2005
    I think it's great - what a pose! what an expression!
    Don't clean the concrete - it's much more 'real' this way (and it's not distracting at all)
    The only thing I might recommend is to try to lighten the pigeon's feathers in the front to bring up some of the detail.
    But overall it's really great - well done!
    ~Autumn
  • fraincsfraincs Registered Users Posts: 126 Major grins
    edited August 13, 2005
    did some correction! icon10.gif maybe a bit too gray now...ne_nau.gif
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  • burkeburke Registered Users Posts: 131 Major grins
    edited August 13, 2005
    yeah - it is a bit gray now.. I like the contrast of the first one better.

    I tried to play with it myself by using a mask and just lightening that one area.. I attached it below. (it's such a subtle change - I don't know if what I did really makes a difference!ne_nau.gif)
    ~A
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