Sara

keith breazeal

wendell

Great shot, but I find the naval piercing distracting.

ole doc

I think her facial pose is too "hard." I know that is what one sees a lot in biker magazines but I find it ofputting.
Nick

keith breazeal

ole doc wrote:

I think her facial pose is too "hard." I know that is what one sees a lot in biker magazines but I find it ofputting.
Nick

Yes, harsh. It was a Live calendar shoot. The above photo is a composite of these two- my first ever attempt at something like this.

DonRicklin

ole doc wrote:

I think her facial pose is too "hard." I know that is what one sees a lot in biker magazines but I find it ofputting.
Nick

You mean the 'What are you looking at?" glare. Seems to me it's meant to be off-putting.

As to the naval piercing, It is a high contrast distraction, usually best avoided in photos. Maybe nocking it down some would help.dunno

Don

invisible

What navel piercing?

RacinRandy

It's the 50' woman!!
I think the two individual shots are pretty cool!!

1) Her facial expression is unnerving.

2) Putting the Jet in the background makes her look like a HUGE woman(albeit sexy) but geesh the bike and her become HUGE next to the jet.

3) Difference in shadowing is distracting to me, If she was Posed straddling the bike laid out like she was driving it might help all things a ton.

Maybe try a Different background image. An old barn or Brick wall?? dunno

Nice job on the individual pics but the composite leaves me flat

keith breazeal

Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Here is a different look with some of your advice.

RacinRandy

Much Better!!
To me that is a WAY choice of background, don't you agree?

Great job on the editing with the bike!! All those little nooks and crannies and you got them all very nicely!

While I am not a fan of those high heels she has on this comp is great!thumbthumb

imagesofhim

Nice shot... prefer the new background. My one complaint? Her shoes are about 2 sizes too small--very "non-professional model" to me... Just my thoughts on the model and, by no means, a complaint on the shot--it IS nice!