DSS#49 - Attempt one

pemmett

Did some macro shots and wondered what you thought. Not quite sure if it's there yet or if I should try something else.

#1 - Pen


#2 - Pen


#3 - Pen


#4 - Pen


Really appreciate your feedback.

Thanks/Peter

Velvet-Art

I like the angle of the pen in #2, and I love the blue tones.

#3 and #4 kinda make my eyes go funny looking at them.

My vote is for #2

Tim

JAG

#1 works! I like the negative space to the left and the lighting is wonderful!

travelways

I like #3 but without the blue on the bottom and as JAG says, if you can make it like in #1...

whiterice

Another vote for #2!! Beautiful colors.:ivar

slpollett

I like both #1 and #2, but maybe #1 slightly better. #1 we'd probably never figure out this is a pen. That's why I gave it the edge over #2.

Sherry

The Curious Camel

My favorite is one. I think two is ok but I can recognize it right away.
One has has good composition. Nice blue color.

peace, gail

DsrtVW

1 looks like some kind of jet afterburner or rocket engine. Very cool, it took me minute to figure it out looking at 1 then went oh yea when seeing 2

pemmett

Thanks everyone for your great feedback. I'm not sure if I'll try and reshoot this or try something a bit different.

Cheers/peter