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rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
edited May 2, 2010 in Street and Documentary
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited April 26, 2010
    Wow, talk about attitude! Nice capture. I'm not so sure about the crop, though. Have you tried other versions? I think you could lose some from the left, say, eliminating Oregon and the traffic light pole. Or crop from the right and get rid of the trash can. The mural is kind of cool, but in B&W I'm not sure it is adding too much, especially since the coolest bit is all the way to the right of the frame. ne_nau.gif
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  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited April 26, 2010
    Thanks for the feedback. I played with it some more. Here it is with a square crop:

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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited April 26, 2010
    Yes
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  • Wil DavisWil Davis Registered Users Posts: 1,692 Major grins
    edited April 26, 2010
    I think the B & W is great! Super range of tones, and nice composition!

    I agree that the crop right might be an improvement, but I think there's also another crop that's as good…

    …try slicing a piece off the left, just to the right of the x-ing signal post; OK, so you lose the girl on the left, but really she's nothing to do with the three kids at the edge of the sidewalk…

    Love the B&W!

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited April 27, 2010
    The crop looks better to me. I tried the other suggestion, eliminating Oregon and I think I prefer it. The garbage can is a better fit than she is. lol3.gif
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  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited April 28, 2010
    Newest version:
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    This is credited to Richard's guidance and Wil's suggestion. Thanks, guys!
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited April 29, 2010
    rainbow wrote:
    Newest version:
    This is credited to Richard's guidance and Wil's suggestion. Thanks, guys!

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    and I think the final cuts the best
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited April 30, 2010
    bfjr wrote: »
    Well you too thumb.gif
    and I think the final cuts the best

    Looks good to me. thumb.gif
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  • FoquesFoques Registered Users Posts: 1,951 Major grins
    edited April 30, 2010
    i like! :)
    the garbage can to finish the lines is brilliant!!rolleyes1.gif
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  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited May 2, 2010
    bfjr wrote: »
    Well you too thumb.gif
    and I think the final cuts the best

    Thanks!
  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited May 2, 2010
    Richard wrote: »
    Looks good to me. thumb.gif

    Thanks for spending the time with all the suggestions!
  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited May 2, 2010
    Foques wrote: »
    i like! :)
    the garbage can to finish the lines is brilliant!!rolleyes1.gif

    Thanks!

    The "brilliance" is only on the third version with the decision that the garbage can added more than the "Oregon" girl in the crop...rolleyes1.gif
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