At the park

kalye

Hello everyone,

First time poster! Awesome shots in here. Here's some of mine.

sabesh

I like all three shots. IMHO, they would be better brightness was reduced a tad bit and shadows opened up slightly (fill).

For the first shot, it might work even better if you cropped out the exit sign on top and cloned out the object lying on the metal work (bottom, right). Regards.

Richard

kalye wrote:

Hello everyone,

First time poster! Awesome shots in here. Here's some of mine.

Hi there kalye, and welcome to Dgrin . Nice first post. I especially like the play of lines in #3. I would have framed #1 a little differently--either include the whole exit sign at the top or exclude it altogether. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

kalye

Thanks for the feedback guys! I cropped pic #1 some more and decreased brightness a bit, what do you think? This was a hip shot while walking up the stairs. I should've gone down and walked up again to get a better shot

craig_d

Welcome to dgrin.

I like #2 particularly. Nicely-timed shot!

As has already been mentioned, the pictures seem a bit too bright. On the one hand this brings out the "sunny day" aspect well, but it also loses some details in the bright areas, especially the concrete surface in #3. The shots also look a little over-sharpened to my eyes; there are noticeable halos in some places. You might check your camera settings to see if you can lower the sharpening a bit.

You're off to a good start here, anyway. I hope to see more from you.

sabesh

kalye wrote:

Thanks for the feedback guys! I cropped pic #1 some more and decreased brightness a bit, what do you think? This was a hip shot while walking up the stairs. I should've gone down and walked up again to get a better shot

Looks great now! I like!