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3: I'd try to clone out the shadow below her lip
4: Very nice. I just think the area around HER left arm pit looks a bit wrong (must be the cut of the top). I'd liquify it & I'd do some cloning in that area also (she seems to have a dark spot there .... )
5: Very nice, what a beauty
6: Very pretty, but you wanna check the "white" background on that one ... looks like you tried to hide something on the left, but you didn't end up cleaning the whole background
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3: I'd try to clone out the shadow below her lip
4: Very nice. I just think the area around HER left arm pit looks a bit wrong (must be the cut of the top). I'd liquify it & I'd do some cloning in that area also (she seems to have a dark spot there .... )
5: Very nice, what a beauty
6: Very pretty, but you wanna check the "white" background on that one ... looks like you tried to hide something on the left, but you didn't end up cleaning the whole background
thank you Agnie. I see that shadow, will try that. Will try the armpit suggestion also. Not sure what you are seeing on the "white" background. The background looks lighter (whiter) on camera left than on camera white. Is that what you see?
There is a photographer, Mark Bryant who has some great textures to add to various photographs. You might like them for the first one.
Thanks. That's a good idea. Didn't think of using textures to take some attention off that background. Will see if I can find the photographer you suggested.
She's very lovely and these are just great. But I gotta say... her eyes are freaking me out! (They see into my soul....) Are they really naturally that color?
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Number two does it for me. All are very nice but love that one!
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3: I'd try to clone out the shadow below her lip
4: Very nice. I just think the area around HER left arm pit looks a bit wrong (must be the cut of the top). I'd liquify it & I'd do some cloning in that area also (she seems to have a dark spot there .... )
5: Very nice, what a beauty
6: Very pretty, but you wanna check the "white" background on that one ... looks like you tried to hide something on the left, but you didn't end up cleaning the whole background
Thanks Qarik!
Thanks Kris. #2 is a hit but I like 3 and 6 best.
Thank you rhondavid. #2 seems to be a favorite for several.
Thanks very much Hackbone. I like #1 just don't like the background much. I could darken it some, just got lazy!!
thank you Agnie. I see that shadow, will try that. Will try the armpit suggestion also. Not sure what you are seeing on the "white" background. The background looks lighter (whiter) on camera left than on camera white. Is that what you see?
There is a photographer, Mark Bryant who has some great textures to add to various photographs. You might like them for the first one.
www.cameraone.biz
Thanks. That's a good idea. Didn't think of using textures to take some attention off that background. Will see if I can find the photographer you suggested.
Thanks for your input Jon.
That does it, #4 is the winner!
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