First time to this forum - thoughts on these images

drdesignsdrdesigns Registered Users Posts: 9 Beginner grinner
edited August 16, 2005 in Wildlife
Hi Everyone,

I am fairly new to Smugmug. Been using it for about 3 months.

I purchased a new Rebel XT back in May. I am still learning it. Photography has been a lifelong hobby, mostly shots of family and friends. I am to the point where I would like to spread my wings a little and get some constructive feedback on some photos. So look at the ones below and tell me what you think. Which ones do you like and why? Which ones could be made better and why?

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You are also welcome to look at the this gallery. Some of them are simply snapshots to show family members and are not very good.
Foster Kitten Gallery

Comments

  • gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited August 16, 2005
    G'day & welcome to D/grin drdesigns. #2 is my favorite.

    If you like you can put the photo into the thread. As you are typing your post..copy the shot from S/mug as you did but instead of pasting it into the post...left click on the square yellow symbol with the mountain in it & when a box appears above..paste it into that.

    Gus
  • drdesignsdrdesigns Registered Users Posts: 9 Beginner grinner
    edited August 16, 2005
    Thanks Gus! I was trying to figure it out as you were posting. Being on a Mac makes it more difficult for some reason. But I found the thread that explains how and after a couple of tries it works great!
  • HarrybHarryb Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 22,708 Major grins
    edited August 16, 2005
    Welcome to Dgrin and thanks for sharing your shots.

    Cute shots of the dog and kitten with the second shot being the best. The focus seems to be a bit soft on #1 & #3. On 2 & 3 you cut part of the dog off and the pics would have been better if you had the whole dog in frame. On the first shot there is a bit of a tilt to the right I would have tried to correct that in my post processing.

    The second shot is a really good capture. thumb.gif

    Looking forward to seeing more of your shots.
    Harry
    http://behret.smugmug.com/ NANPA member
    How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
  • ltdesignphotovideoltdesignphotovideo Registered Users Posts: 146 Major grins
    edited August 16, 2005
    I agree with HarryB. I like the second shot the best. It either needs one extreme or another. Either the whole dog or a tight crop of the dog and kitten as follows. Just a suggestion. I like to feel like I'm there in the midst of whatever is going on. Other than that, your shots are great. Keep spreading those wings.
    -t

    Again, just a suggestion.
    :drums
    Lindsay Thompson
    www.grafxcreative.com
  • Steve CaviglianoSteve Cavigliano Super Moderators Posts: 3,599 moderator
    edited August 16, 2005
    Hiya dr and welcome to Dgrin wave.gif

    These shots are so darn cute iloveyou.gif Those 2 look like they get along extremely well. Least I didn't see any blood, or flyin fur in your pics....Laughing.gif

    I agree with Harry about the tilt in the 1st shot. Also I think the kitty is on the edge (exposure-wise).

    #2 is priceless. Color, sharpness and exposure are all right on thumb.gifthumb.gif I'd suggest maybe cropping a bit off the right side so the kitten and dog face are larger. It's the "nose-to-nose" contact that makes this pic, IMHO. The rest of the dog's body and the steps on the left of the frame add little, if anything to the shot. Very, very nice work on this one clap.gif

    While not as "cute" or sharp as #2, #3 could also benefit from some cropping, IMO. Personally, I'd crop about a 1/3 of the right side out. The dog's face and the kitty's face are aligned so nicely and I like the action of the kitty climbing over the dog's leg.

    Nice as they are, cropping tighter may improve them even more. Again, just my opinion.

    Thanks for sharing these and I can't wait to get home to show them to my 16yo daughter who is an animal nut. I can already hear her high pitched "Oohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Daddy, they're so cute" comment... rolleyes1.gif

    Steve
    SmugMug Support Hero
  • benbobenbo Registered Users Posts: 206 Major grins
    edited August 16, 2005
    Welcome to dgrin. Really loveeeeeee the 2 one. Keep shooting and sending.
    BenBo
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  • drdesignsdrdesigns Registered Users Posts: 9 Beginner grinner
    edited August 16, 2005
    Thanks for the replies everyone.

    Per your suggestions I have tweaked this shot. Proportionally I used a 5x7 format.
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    Taking your suggestions into consideration I also modified these two:
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    Do you think I should photoshop out the black iron rail that is showing up?

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  • Osprey WhispererOsprey Whisperer Registered Users Posts: 3,803 Major grins
    edited August 16, 2005
    Yes...welcome and thanks for sharing your pictures with us. Becareful..Hallmark might be calling soon. Just ask Harry. :D

    Cheers

    BMP
    Mike McCarthy

    "Osprey Whisperer"

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  • justinungerjustinunger Registered Users Posts: 19 Big grins
    edited August 16, 2005
    drdesigns wrote:
    Thanks for the replies everyone.

    Per your suggestions I have tweaked this shot. Proportionally I used a 5x7 format.
    Much better! thumb.gif

    Animal pictures are much better when you don't cut off the feet!
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