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First Try, some feedback would be apreciated

ChuBean

Now correct me if I am wrong...but shouldn't the spiral be narrowing on the focal point of the photo? This makes the abdomen the focal point, where it should be the eye in this case.<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>

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ChuBean wrote: »

Now correct me if I am wrong...but shouldn't the spiral be narrowing on the focal point of the photo? This makes the abdomen the focal point, where it should be the eye in this case.<o:p></o:p>

I though of that, i just didn't want to post 2 pictures up.

travelways

Gorgesous! clap

I guess we can stop our trials now

AndMan

Very nice

sherstone

Love it - it is a really nice example.
Suggestion would be to remove the wing? just behind the head and mouth parts, I find it distracting.