DSS 50 2nd Verse

WhatSheSaw

2nd attempt. Whaddya think? Any suggestions?

Heaven


With overlay

TLVoDra

I like the subject and it fits the theme, but I'm not loving the colors of the blanket...I like the folds and softness of it, but would darken or change the colors to contrast more with the white fur of the cat...hope this makes sense.

travelways

I find the blanket distracting too - maybe a sofa or an unfolded one color blanket in the background...

AndMan

photo-bug wrote: »

I find the blanket distracting too - maybe a sofa or an unfolded one color blanket in the background...

liflander

I like the concept, but I think the spiral is not quite there. Can you reshoot and manipulate your subject without getting scratched?

rteest42

Manipulate a CAT??? LMAO!!

Cute snapshot, but the blanket, not so much~

lizzard_nyc

Wonder what it would look like in b&w, maybe then the blanket wouldn't be an issue. Might be a little surreal with the cat being black and white--

So I guess what I'm asking is--please can I see this in b&w--and to make the golden spiral more obvious--maybe a tighter crop on the left, more in line with the overlaid graph. Just a thought.

WhatSheSaw

Actually, I could manipulate this kitty. He is the sweetest thing and purrs whenever you touch him. I'll see if I can catch him again.

Here is a B&W cropped version.

kdotaylor

The crop and the b/w make this a much better composition. I like it!

AndMan

kdotaylor wrote: »

The crop and the b/w make this a much better composition. I like it!