Family shoot

Z6I

I am trying to improve my portrait work and would appreciate any advice based on these.
Thanks,
Bob

Svennie

There are no photos here ;-)

codiac2600

These are the images:










You used the partial web addy for them. Next time try right clicking on the image you want to show and select the copy image address option then used the img tags to displat them in the post

codiac2600

These are all very good and I especially love the last one because it's just full of fun and happiness in it. On the group shot try cropping it 8x10 to get rid of the area surrounding them as it's mostly void.

Z6I

codiac2600 wrote: »

These are all very good and I especially love the last one because it's just full of fun and happiness in it. On the group shot try cropping it 8x10 to get rid of the area surrounding them as it's mostly void.

Thank you for your help. I was going to get back to fix my post and got called away.
I toyed with your suggestion on the 8x10 ratio before I posted and was torn between the two as I like the background. Your point that it is "void" makes me want to crop again.
Thanks,
Bob

Svennie

They are indeed very nice. I love the first one! I would have opened up my lens more, but that's because I really like shallow DOF ;-)