My 2nd attempt

SimpsonBrothers · May 30, 2010

A little bit of C&C please.

Lord Vetinari · May 30, 2010

Both lovely captures - only critique would be, the subject is a bit central in both shots - with bugs try to give them more room in the direction they are looking . so in both of these shots i Would have tried to get the bug further to the left off centre on one of the thirds points (rule of thirds).
Brian v.

SimpsonBrothers · May 30, 2010

Ok, thanks!

GOLDENORFE · June 1, 2010

good shots, as brian mentioned about composition

SimpsonBrothers · June 1, 2010

Better?

GOLDENORFE · June 1, 2010

much better composition

Lord Vetinari · June 2, 2010

Certainly looks more pleasing to my eyes but it's you that counts !
Brian V.

SimpsonBrothers · June 2, 2010

Is this crop too tight?

Lord Vetinari · June 2, 2010

I would say yes - I would leave a bit more room at the bottom, but again it's what you think that counts most.
Brian v.

My 2nd attempt

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