#52 A first draft

travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
edited June 11, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
Here is a first draft on playing with letters:

Ottawa

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I just thought to capture elements from the same category representing the word...

What do you think?

***This is no longer a first draft - I have an update down-below.
I would appreciate your opinion, please.
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  • TLVoDraTLVoDra Registered Users Posts: 171 Major grins
    edited June 1, 2010
    Nice! I like that all the letters are from a similar theme...I thought about trying this approach as well (but just need a theme). The 1st T wasn't as clearly a T when I first looked at it, but when taking the whole word in, it was easier to see.
    Tammy~
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  • JAGJAG Super Moderators Posts: 9,088 moderator
    edited June 1, 2010
    TLVoDra wrote: »
    Nice! I like that all the letters are from a similar theme...I thought about trying this approach as well (but just need a theme). The 1st T wasn't as clearly a T when I first looked at it, but when taking the whole word in, it was easier to see.
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  • slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,223 Major grins
    edited June 1, 2010
    Very nice. I agree that the first 'T' isn't as strong as the other letters. The others are so very nicely done that the first 't' seems a little out of place. That's the only letter that I'd suggest changing. I especially love the 'w'!


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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 1, 2010
    Thank you :)

    I'll try to find another T and I will refine the whole image.

    I also have some other ideas. This is a such a cool theme,it's hard to stop to
    only one idea :D
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  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited June 1, 2010
    Great start you have there, Tatiana! You're really on this!
    SandiZ
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 1, 2010
    SeascapeS wrote: »
    Great start you have there, Tatiana! You're really on this!

    Thank you Sandy for your input and for considering my entry on the previous contest as one of your favorites thumb.gif
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  • liflanderliflander Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    Nice work! I think you should offer to sell this to the city of Ottawa for tourism marketing!
    Mark

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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2010
    Thank you for the feed-back.

    I made another version of the OTTAWA word here:

    892955019_saUWe-L.jpg

    and also found another subject.

    Please tell me if you can read this word below - what is it?

    893171328_ZPsmN-L.jpg

    Thank you for looking :)
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  • kidzmomkidzmom Registered Users Posts: 828 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2010
    Country! Cute!!
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2010
    Thank you Kelly :)
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  • AndManAndMan Registered Users Posts: 1,252 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    I think the new T in the 2nd version of Ottawa is an improvement over the 1st one but its a shame it is so similar to the one you already have.

    Country is nice but I have to say that I had to work out the U from the other letters it is not an easy "see"
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    AndMan wrote: »
    I think the new T in the 2nd version of Ottawa is an improvement over the 1st one but its a shame it is so similar to the one you already have.

    Country is nice but I have to say that I had to work out the U from the other letters it is not an easy "see"

    15524779-Ti.gif
  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 9, 2010
    Country has a great "country feel" to it. The cow is a very unique idea for the T, and cracks me up! I too had to decifer the U from the other letters, but I find if I just sit back and take it all in, it all worksthumb.gif
    (your 2nd ottowa is nice too)
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 9, 2010
    Thank you very much for your feed-back thumb.gif
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  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited June 9, 2010
    How did you have time to take all those photographs in a 2 week period? Laughing.gif They are all nice images. I like both groups.

    photo-bug wrote: »
    Thank you for the feed-back.

    I made another version of the OTTAWA word here:

    892955019_saUWe-L.jpg

    and also found another subject.

    Please tell me if you can read this word below - what is it?

    893171328_ZPsmN-L.jpg

    Thank you for looking :)
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    Jenn wrote: »
    How did you have time to take all those photographs in a 2 week period? Laughing.gif They are all nice images. I like both groups.

    Well, actually I didn't take them in a 2 week period.

    I took the Ottawa shots in the afternoon of 31 May, along with many other shots in Ottawa.
    - these were only from the parliament building (and courtyard), witch is so nice and I think,
    representative for Ottawa.

    With the country shots it's a different story- they were mainly taken on June 5 but some on June 2.
    - We took 3 days off for a family event and drove to Thousand Islands. These villages in Southern
    Ontario are so nice and there are so many things to photograph, so I got the idea of using the word
    "Country".

    So no, they were not taken in a 2 week period - just few days.
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  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    photo-bug wrote: »
    Well, actually I didn't take them in a 2 week period.

    I took the Ottawa shots in the afternoon of 31 May, along with many other shots in Ottawa.
    - these were only from the parliament building (and courtyard), witch is so nice and I think,
    representative for Ottawa.

    With the country shots it's a different story- they were mainly taken on June 5 but some on June 2.
    - We took 3 days off for a family event and drove to Thousand Islands. These villages in Southern
    Ontario are so nice and there are so many things to photograph, so I got the idea of using the word
    "Country".

    So no, they were not taken in a 2 week period - just few days.

    Well.. They are all beautiful photos. :D
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
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    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    Jenn wrote: »
    Well.. They are all beautiful photos. :D

    Thank you Jenn, I'm sure you can do the same thumb.gif
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  • liflanderliflander Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    Oohhh! I think "country" is more colorful and fun than "ottawa". Very appealing, I'd go with "country."
    Mark

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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    liflander wrote: »
    Oohhh! I think "country" is more colorful and fun than "ottawa". Very appealing, I'd go with "country."

    Thank you Mark,

    - it was a very fun exercise to find all those letters in the country environment.

    I'll keep my entry - thank you again :D
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