Ceiling

Foques

Was at the local mall, and taken this right before I was.. ugh.. escorted out:rofl



thoughts?

CnC appreciated.

r3t1awr3yd

Nice capture. I'd probably clone out the two circle lights but I'm a huge weirdo and I don't think they have a place amongst all those nifty triangles. And it's probably my monitor but I really like the gradient fade from grey to black from the bottom to the top of the picture in the "in between" parts.

The more I look at it, the more I really, really like it.

black mamba

Nicely done. If it were my shot, I would clone out the two overhead lights and crop the bottom frame up to the first horizontal crossing line...making it not quite a square rendering.

Tom

Foques

hmm.. i'll give it a try.
thank you!

lizzard_nyc

I like this abstract.
Good eye.


Why were you escorted out?

Jack'll do

I'm not generally a fan of abstracts (unless they're geometric) so Well seen and captured. I do agree that you should lose the lights and follow Tom's advice re the crop.

Foques

I will follow the suggestion... Just didn't get home till rather late last night.. The original thought about leaving the lights was related to the shape differences. Basically, I liked how squares were taking over the 95% of the shot, and then there were 4 of those rebellious circular shapes Specifically, since the set on the bottom was black, and the set on the left was lit.. it was mirroring the structure of black and lit squares. But I am weird.
thank you.

I was escorted out because, apparently, it is illegal to shoot in the mall I shot this at... perhaps, they didn't really like the size of the 80-200mm 2.8..