Pamela

tropico

Here are another photo from the photo-shoot with Pamela.
And this weekend I will have another session with her and her boyfriend at the beach. I can't wait!

C&C please.

Yuri Pautov

Beautiful model. And I like the result. As for critique - next time try to use more simple dress of your model - those patterns draw attention from the face. Thank you,... Yuri

tropico

Yuri Pautov wrote: »

Beautiful model. And I like the result. As for critique - next time try to use more simple dress of your model - those patterns draw attention from the face. Thank you,... Yuri

Thank you Yuri! Yes, she is a beautiful girl!
And I see what you mean with her dress, thank you for pointing that out!

Will have another photo-shoot tomorrow, so I might try with different clothes!

adbsgicom

I'm far from expert on any of this, so take it for what it's worth.

Overall, a very lovely picture.

Have her get rid of the hairband on the wrist. I know my daughter thinks they are fashion, but they just aren't that attractive.

The image looks slightly out of focus. Were you doing this intentionally as an overall effect?

If you are using photoshop, I think you can push the whitepoint down (using levels) a bit and sharpen around her face (unsharp mask) and get more pop out of the image.

tropico

adbsgicom wrote: »

I'm far from expert on any of this, so take it for what it's worth.

Overall, a very lovely picture.

Have her get rid of the hairband on the wrist. I know my daughter thinks they are fashion, but they just aren't that attractive.

The image looks slightly out of focus. Were you doing this intentionally as an overall effect?

If you are using photoshop, I think you can push the whitepoint down (using levels) a bit and sharpen around her face (unsharp mask) and get more pop out of the image.

Thank you so much! Yes, next time I will ask her to take off the hairband.

I actually made this photo blurred in Photoshop. Used gaussian blur, I wanted her skin to look smoother. Her skin is beautiful, but she was really cold, so she got heavy goosebumps on her arms.
I will try to make her face sharper, and also change the whitepoint.
Thank you for your suggestions and for taking the time to comment on my photo,!