#52 second attempt....what do you think?

kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
edited June 5, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    Nice! It is totally obvious what word you are spelling. The only one that takes a bit to see is the sax. Maybe you could replace it with a valve on a trumpet or other brass instrument.
  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    I think you've got a fantastic idea! Very nice!

    The only two things I noticed were that the "U" doesn't quite touch the bottom of the frame like the other letters do, and there is a slight slant of light on the piano keys in the front. Other than that, I just love it. thumb.gif
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  • liflanderliflander Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    Awesome! I would like to see the tonal range more consistent across all the frames. They don't all seem to have a full tonal range. May be a little tricky to do...hmm, maybe if you make sure there are pure blacks and pure whites in each image. An auto-levels or auto-contrast command might accomplish that. Or using the black and white point tools to set them in each image....
    Mark

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  • me_minihahame_minihaha Registered Users Posts: 62 Big grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    very creative! I can see the word, the sax isn't as simple as the rest but then again its a sax! I love that instrument.
    Victoria
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  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    re-worked
    Thanks for your comments, everyone. I think I've fixed this up a little, and will go ahead and enter it.890572593_AEQVb-M.jpg
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  • AndManAndMan Registered Users Posts: 1,252 Major grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    Very nice re-work Kate. thumb.gif
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  • slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,219 Major grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    I agree! Nice job!

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  • tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    I love the re-work!

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