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# 52 C & C Please

BoylerianBoylerian Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
edited June 5, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
This is one idea I was able to put together. Any feedback would be helpful. :D

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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    Fun! Good work on the letters!

    I do not favor the wrinkled BG on the doll. And these do not pop the way some others do.
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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    I'd start by using a different background for the "Y". It's a bit wrinkled. You've got some shadows at the bottom of the frame for the "T". The background for the "O" isn't flat in the upper left.

    I can definitely see the word though!
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
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    liflanderliflander Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2010
    Yes, I agree with above comments, but those are technical issues. The important thing is that you have an excellent idea and your are well on your way to a great shot.

    Also, you stole my idea! Rats! But I'm glad you did it so well!
    Mark

    LiflanderPhotography.com
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    AndManAndMan Registered Users Posts: 1,252 Major grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    SeascapeS wrote: »
    I'd start by using a different background for the "Y". It's a bit wrinkled. You've got some shadows at the bottom of the frame for the "T". The background for the "O" isn't flat in the upper left.

    I can definitely see the word though!
    15524779-Ti.gif
    Peter

    www.andmanphotography.com

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    "Landscape photography is the supreme test of the photographer - and often the supreme disappointment." Ansel Adams
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    me_minihahame_minihaha Registered Users Posts: 62 Big grins
    edited June 5, 2010
    I like it! I do agree with the having a different background for the y
    Victoria
    "It's awesome to be ALIVE!"
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