#52--My First Attempt--C&C Please

slpollett

Well, I'm just not happy with what I have so far. I'm so envious of the others who have been able to find a common theme with all the letters of their words. Mine is just a hodge-podge and I don't really like the way they look together. I'm planning to keep looking for letters, but I won't have much more time to work on this. I might be stuck with this. :dunno

Anyway, here's three different versions. Please tell me what you think. Any suggestions for me??

#1


#2 Cropped the 's', cropped the 'e', & a different 'h'


#3 Black & White


I have several options to choose from for the letters s & h, but I liked these best.

I really don't like my first 'r' but I haven't found anything better. I'm open to criticism, so fire away.

Thanks,
Sherry

Velvet-Art

I like the 1st one the best, but I agree with you about the 1st "r", at 1st I thought it was a "t". I love the 2nd "r" though, very clever.


Tim

AndMan

Velvet-Art wrote: »

I like the 1st one the best, but I agree with you about the 1st "r", at 1st I thought it was a "t". I love the 2nd "r" though, very clever.


Tim

me_minihaha

I like the first one, to be honest I have trouble with the first r the handle part that comes down could be the start to a capital R but the rest is to much like a t. I like your hodge-podge it is very clever

slpollett

Thanks everybody. I'll keep looking for another 'r.' Maybe I'll get lucky.

Sherry