#52--2nd attempt--What do you think?

slpollett

Ok...I found another 'r' so I have tried a couple of more possibilities. Is any one of these better than my first attempt?

C&C appreciated as always.

Thanks.

1. New 'r'


2. New 'r' different 's'


3. Another different 's'


4. Different 'h'


5. A different 'y'


I'm leaning toward one of the first two, but I can't decide which 's' I like better. I'm still not sure I like the first 'r' or the 'y' either.....

Anyway, I'm listening.......

Thanks,
Sherry

tinamarie52

I like #2 b/c the S is different from the E. It works for me.

Chris

AndMan

#2 +1

me_minihaha

I instantly liked the second one

kdotaylor

I like the S in #2, the H in #1, the Y in #1...I like the way the overall Sherry reads. Nice job!

travelways

I like the first one best.

_ I also like a lot your second "R"

slpollett

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I'll probably go with #2, but I think I'm going to wait a few days in case I see another 'r'. I still don't care much for that first one.

Sherry

ic4u

slpollett wrote: »

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I'll probably go with #2, but I think I'm going to wait a few days in case I see another 'r'. I still don't care much for that first one.

Sherry

I wonder if you try shooting that first 'r' on a different BG, maybe it would look/jive better with the rest of the images, just a thought
I like #2 the best also!

slpollett

Thanks. I put that tree saw (the first 'r') against our storage building (new wood), against our fence (weathered wood), against the garage door (off-white paint), by a tree, in the grass, next to the swing set (so it could be 'standing' with the sky as a bg, and next to our u-haul type trailer (bright white). The grass was the best of the bunch, but it still just doesn't do it for me. Maybe I should put it against the brick on my house or the concrete. I'm going to try again this weekend to see what I come up with. I'd really just like to find a different 'r' I think.

On another note, I found a better 'y' where I work and was going to try to get it today but it's raining. :cry I may come back over the weekend and just walk around campus. I can probably find the whole alphabet if I look hard enough!

Sherry