My daughter, c&c thread

WirenWiren Registered Users Posts: 741 Major grins
edited June 8, 2010 in People
I am not a big people shooter.....street candids are one thing, but trying to do an artful portrait shoot is not what I tried to do much. Did some outside and then some inside with a new off cam flash/umbrella set up.

I would love your C & C so I can improve.......:bow Oh, and thanks :D

1. 0_0_92fbf8d1e25699fee06063d9773615bb_1

2. 0_0_d352d1837fced45990f42c2fe2aba716_1

3. 0_0_f581653708cdfa99f59c7e3238096e8f_1

4. 0_0_eb82f824a4abda3f577a47861288f7d2_1

6. 0_0_ada19ed5fcae55837f3407040922b99c_1

7. 0_0_b063032091c8b18317d34f59a1daa636_1

8. 0_0_0e51ec1ad2ff17d3d1f4dccae3c0983b_1

9. 0_0_ab6cd4893e9f5b25067fdf3a371e6050_1
Lee Wiren

Comments

  • fireguy.edfireguy.ed Registered Users Posts: 36 Big grins
    edited June 7, 2010
    White balance looks off in the first one, whole image has a yellow tint. I like them all as far as composition, not too overly "posed"...

    I have the same issue with my daughter.... have her bring a brush next time for the stragglers!
  • jheuserjheuser Registered Users Posts: 20 Big grins
    edited June 7, 2010
    6 and 9 are the ones I like.

    Just more proof I need an umbrella or something.
  • PhotoLasVegasPhotoLasVegas Registered Users Posts: 264 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2010
    I'm pretty sure #1 was supposed to be like that - desat and vintage look?

    I think it's a nice series - she looks a little uncomfortable but I can't blame her - our kids HATE it when we take their pics, and they just aren't natural. I think its a kid/parent thing!

    There's some minor things, like on the inside shots, the white spots on the floor.

    #1 and #6 are my faves.

    On a final note, I think if this was done for another family, the mom would treasure them... I hope you can look at them like a "mom" instead of a photog! :)
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  • WirenWiren Registered Users Posts: 741 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    PhotoLasVegas wrote: »
    I'm pretty sure #1 was supposed to be like that - desat and vintage look?

    I think it's a nice series - she looks a little uncomfortable but I can't blame her - our kids HATE it when we take their pics, and they just aren't natural. I think its a kid/parent thing!

    There's some minor things, like on the inside shots, the white spots on the floor.

    #1 and #6 are my faves.

    On a final note, I think if this was done for another family, the mom would treasure them... I hope you can look at them like a "mom" instead of a photog! :)


    Yes, #1 was processed with the desaturated photo look.

    Actually, I am very happy with this set, I just got in a 2nd umbrella today and hope that my lighting is better, but for black felt tacked to the wall in a 10x10 office, I am pleased with the results.......I just know there are ways to improve and love to learn from others.

    Oh, and actually, I just look at them like a happy dad, but mom likes them too rolleyes1.gif Oh, and I might point out that I am happy with these also as I did this in complete manual settings AND used Manual Focus, the fact that I got all these great shots makes me feel great!

    Lee
    Lee Wiren
  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    #6 is the winner! she looks very forced and awkward on the train tracks.
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  • WirenWiren Registered Users Posts: 741 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    Qarik wrote: »
    #6 is the winner! she looks very forced and awkward on the train tracks.


    Awkward......yes, forced? headscratch.gif definitely not. Thanks for the comment, I also thought #6 was the winner of the day.

    Lee
    Lee Wiren
  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    Wiren wrote: »
    Awkward......yes, forced? headscratch.gif definitely not. Thanks for the comment, I also thought #6 was the winner of the day.

    Lee

    maybe uncomfortable is a better word? when a subject is not comfortable in front of the camera it can really show. in #6 she looks like she OWNS the stage!
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  • Manfr3dManfr3d Registered Users Posts: 2,008 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    Overall I like those shots very much. I would experiment a bit and try to also shoot some frames from a lower perspective (outdoors) so that the horizon is placed below the subjects head (say waistlevel?) to remove some background clutter and create a sense of open space emphasizing the subject a bit more.
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  • fireguy.edfireguy.ed Registered Users Posts: 36 Big grins
    edited June 8, 2010
    D'OH! Disregard the comment about #1. Looks great now that I've realized it was PP'd that way... OOPS!
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