DSS52-two for your consideration...c&c plz!

ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
edited June 12, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
I have 2 different ideas I have been working on, still works in progress,
but I'd love some feedback on which, if either, works better than the other...thanks in advance!

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  • TLVoDraTLVoDra Registered Users Posts: 171 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    Love Love the clouds!! I could read "Imagine" right away. I thought about something similar but our clouds here didn't cooperate. : ) Very nicely done!!!
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    TLVoDra wrote: »
    Love Love the clouds!! I could read "Imagine" right away. I thought about something similar but our clouds here didn't cooperate. : ) Very nicely done!!!

    I couldn't get the "imagine" until I read this post. Shadows on the other hand i got right away. Plus visually they're more interesting. :D
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  • SimpsonBrothersSimpsonBrothers Registered Users Posts: 1,079 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2010
    Both awesome!
    I would drop the s and make it just 'shadow'
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    TLVoDra wrote: »
    Love Love the clouds!! I could read "Imagine" right away. I thought about something similar but our clouds here didn't cooperate. : ) Very nicely done!!!

    Thanks Tammy, I'm hoping for some more cloudy skies to try and improve some of the letters, and I'm also trying for a different word and I need 2 more letters for it. Glad you liked it and could read it:D
    Karin


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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    pyroPrints.com wrote: »
    I couldn't get the "imagine" until I read this post. Shadows on the other hand i got right away. Plus visually they're more interesting. :D

    Hmmm, perhaps it's the same letters I'm looking to improve on that made it hard for you to read, thanks for the inputthumb.gif and thanks for the interest in Shadows!
    Karin


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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    SimpsonBrothers wrote: »
    Both awesome!
    I would drop the s and make it just 'shadow'

    Thanks SB....I kinda feel like it needs an s on the end since it's multiple frames, but that's just me. I am going to shoot a new S for it though, my husband says the end S looks more like a J
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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    pyroPrints.com wrote: »
    I couldn't get the "imagine" until I read this post. Shadows on the other hand i got right away. Plus visually they're more interesting. :D

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    I love the Shadows one!
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  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    I like them both! I like the idea of the clouds better, but can see the shadows word better.
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    Very creative and nice, both.

    I couldn't see the letters immediately, but once I saw the word it was obvious.

    I agree with the "S"
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  • me_minihahame_minihaha Registered Users Posts: 62 Big grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    I got the words right away. I like them both I love imagine but I can read shadows better except for the "S" it kinda looks like a J more then an S. They are both very creative. I also tried doing clouds but I found it wasn't easy because just as soon as I would see the letter the the clouds moved before I grabbed my camera and the letter was gone so you did an awesome job getting those letters!!!!!!!!!
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  • AndManAndMan Registered Users Posts: 1,252 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    SimpsonBrothers wrote: »
    Both awesome!
    I would drop the s and make it just 'shadow'
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  • tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    I like shadows much better. I aagree that the last S could be improved or left off. I had a hard time figuring out the cloud image.

    Very clever for both.

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  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    I like them both. I look at the clouds and like that one best, then look at the shadows and like that one best.

    Good ideas!
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  • ghinsonghinson Registered Users Posts: 933 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    Props for trying to find a G in clouds!
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2010
    Thank you all so much for taking the time to commentiloveyou.gif
    I hope to be able to make some improvemnts on both images this weekend,
    plus try another idea that came to me this morning on my way to work!
    Greg, that G was the last one I found....that and the A(which im hoping to find a better one) were the hardest to find!
    Thanks again everyone!
    Karin


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  • kidzmomkidzmom Registered Users Posts: 828 Major grins
    edited June 12, 2010
    For me the shadows popped out RIGHT away. Really fun idea!!! The 'imagine' took me awile but it is wonderful as well. I vote for the the shadows! Nice work!
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 12, 2010
    kidzmom wrote: »
    For me the shadows popped out RIGHT away. Really fun idea!!! The 'imagine' took me awile but it is wonderful as well. I vote for the the shadows! Nice work!

    Thanks Kelly!
    The weather doesn't appear to be cooperating for me, possibly tomorrow, but I think I will go ahead and enter the shadows just in case my other ideas don't pan out. I appreciate your feedback!
    Karin


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