First thought on # 53

AirThomAirThom Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
edited June 25, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
I had a brainstorm for a play on this theme but I'm not 100% sure I executed the feel I was going for.... Help? Thoughts/opinions GREATLY appreciated.

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I'm planning a re-shoot some other locations.

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  • lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited June 18, 2010
    Ok--please don't take this the wrong way,but I will say what first came to mind when I saw this--the movie Children of the Corn--which def doesn't say innocence.

    Not because your kids look like that but because they are children and they are standing in a field of corn, plus they look a little upset.

    Am I the only one?

    EDIT: Let me just add that I love the light on the shot and the colors and I get where you were going--just that's what came to mind for me.
    Liz A.
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  • AirThomAirThom Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited June 18, 2010
    They need some Quaker hats... ;)
  • sunflowerstudiosunflowerstudio Registered Users Posts: 145 Major grins
    edited June 18, 2010
    They're squinting, right? I think light that doesn't make them squint. I like the younger boys pose, kind of looking out into the corn, like a farmer surveying his crops. that starts to get at the theme for me, and I'd be interested in seeing that theme explored.
    Ok--please don't take this the wrong way,but I will say what first came to mind when I saw this--the movie Children of the Corn--which def doesn't say innocence.

    Not because your kids look like that but because they are children and they are standing in a field of corn, plus they look a little upset.

    Am I the only one?

    EDIT: Let me just add that I love the light on the shot and the colors and I get where you were going--just that's what came to mind for me.
  • AirThomAirThom Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited June 19, 2010
    What about a tighter crop without super squinty big brother?
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  • photosbyjd2photosbyjd2 Registered Users Posts: 33 Big grins
    edited June 20, 2010
    he looks pissed! not innocent.
  • AirThomAirThom Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited June 21, 2010
    Couple more from that session... if none of these float then I'll be hoping for a productive reshoot. Thanks to everyone for looking, chiming in!

    #3
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    #4
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited June 21, 2010
    Wow... I like #3 a lot!!! To me it's sooo wonderful iloveyou.gif

    PS: Congratulations for such beautiful kids :)
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  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited June 21, 2010
    I, too, like #3--it's a great photo and it conveys the innocence theme strongly. Nice shot!
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  • photosbyjd2photosbyjd2 Registered Users Posts: 33 Big grins
    edited June 21, 2010
  • shadgkissshadgkiss Registered Users Posts: 11 Big grins
    edited June 21, 2010
    #3, awesome work!
  • AirThomAirThom Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited June 22, 2010
    #3 was my wife's favorite too... I do like the more genuine expressions. Thanks for the input everyone! I appreciate it.
  • dlsdls Registered Users Posts: 385 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2010
    I like #3 the most also... with the warm colors, lines, and the two different personalities that seem to be captured in the photo.
  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2010
    Yeah, #3 for me too, adorable!
    Karin


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  • AndManAndMan Registered Users Posts: 1,252 Major grins
    edited June 25, 2010
    ic4u wrote: »
    Yeah, #3 for me too, adorable!
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