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bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
edited June 20, 2010 in Street and Documentary
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  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited June 19, 2010
    Very interesting shot.
  • PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited June 19, 2010
    I like this composition and the title works for me. Can you recover the lights a bit, get a bit more contrast in the foreground?
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited June 19, 2010
    Fun shot. I'll have pepperoni and bell pepper, please 10944573-Ti.gif. I agree with Patti about increasing contrast in the foreground.
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  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited June 19, 2010
    Wonderful capture. I like it!

    A really fun reflection shot.

    I'd probably do a little burning of the bright areas, especially on the tiles on the left side, though I must say that my eyes didn't wander from looking at the "code" until I stepped back and took a second look at the photo as a whole.

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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited June 19, 2010
    michswiss wrote: »
    Very interesting shot.
    Patti wrote: »
    I like this composition and the title works for me. Can you recover the lights a bit, get a bit more contrast in the foreground?
    Richard wrote: »
    Fun shot. I'll have pepperoni and bell pepper, please 10944573-Ti.gif. I agree with Patti about increasing contrast in the foreground.

    What no Anchovies, for shame :D
    Flyinggina wrote: »
    Wonderful capture. I like it!

    A really fun reflection shot.

    I'd probably do a little burning of the bright areas, especially on the tiles on the left side, though I must say that my eyes didn't wander from looking at the "code" until I stepped back and took a second look at the photo as a whole.

    Virginia

    I'l take a stab at redoing with those suggestions in mind.
    Thanks
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited June 20, 2010
    OK here's a Redo
    906945498_6q3wa-XL.jpg

    and here's some more Code to work on :D
    905897184_rVtjP-XL.jpg
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