Baby girls - 2 pics for feedback pls

maeflowermaeflower Registered Users Posts: 4 Beginner grinner
edited June 19, 2010 in People
My first post - scary! A little dramatic maybe, but you all or so talented - I'm nervous. I'm a newbie and I learn something new every shoot, so please be brutally honest because I want to learn from you. Thank you!

These are two of my favorites, but I feel like they were happy accidents and I would love to hear what you think. If you like them, why? And if you don't, how can I improve?

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#2
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Comments

  • kidzmomkidzmom Registered Users Posts: 828 Major grins
    edited June 19, 2010
    First off CONGRATS on your first post! Secondly...CUTE baby! iloveyou.gif

    Okay..my feedback. I wish I could see these photos bigger..They are adorably sweet and lighting is wonderful. The only nits I have are with the crops. Particularly in #1..it would have been wonderful to see that left hand. It is gorgeous though and nothing will take that away! In #2 you have super catch lights on the eyes! Great job with the lighting. Just a touch more shoulder-arm on the right would have been a bonus, but it is a wonderful capture!

    Thanks for sharing. Look forward to more pics!
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