1: The white of her left eye might need a tweak, and her hair is a bit unkempt; arm texture is a bit "pasty", and the pose looks a bit uncomfortable
2: She looks great, but the pillars are skewed…
3: She's a gorgeous woman, but I don't like her arms in this one; it's sort of difficult doing this square on, looks as if she might not have a right arm I wonder if this one might be improved by cropping the bottom so that her eyes were about 1/3 of the way down?
Ryan Clemens www.clemensphotography.us
Canon 7D w/BG-E7 Vertical Grip, Canon 50D w/ BG-E2N Vertical Grip, Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L USM, Canon 18-55mm, Canon 580EX II Flash and other goodies.
Ignorance is no excuss, so lets DGrin!
Comments
1: The white of her left eye might need a tweak, and her hair is a bit unkempt; arm texture is a bit "pasty", and the pose looks a bit uncomfortable
2: She looks great, but the pillars are skewed…
3: She's a gorgeous woman, but I don't like her arms in this one; it's sort of difficult doing this square on, looks as if she might not have a right arm I wonder if this one might be improved by cropping the bottom so that her eyes were about 1/3 of the way down?
4: Nice, but I prefer her expression in #2
Nice job, and thanks for sharing! Gorgeous woman!
- Wil
www.clemensphotography.us
Canon 7D w/BG-E7 Vertical Grip, Canon 50D w/ BG-E2N Vertical Grip, Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L USM, Canon 18-55mm, Canon 580EX II Flash and other goodies.
Ignorance is no excuss, so lets DGrin!
Sam