Hiwaga (Mystery)

zer0typezer0type Registered Users Posts: 11 Big grins
edited July 2, 2010 in People
hi all.. sharing a studio portraiture shot..

hiwaga #1
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/jamesbautista/4102745940/&quot; title="tutti - hiwaga by James Bautista, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2696/4102745940_5f5825a687_b.jpg&quot; width="1024" height="683" alt="tutti - hiwaga"></a>


hiwaga #2
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/jamesbautista/4102742382/&quot; title="tutti by James Bautista, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2610/4102742382_47afbd763e_b.jpg&quot; width="683" height="1024" alt="tutti"></a>
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  • adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited June 27, 2010
    Lovely!!
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  • SamSam Registered Users Posts: 7,419 Major grins
    edited June 27, 2010
    There is two dots near her right eye? It just seems to take my attention away from the subject.

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  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,934 moderator
    edited June 28, 2010
    The lighting on these two photos is very nice. Subtle and producing some nice shadows too. The poses are nice as well.

    The one thing that distracts from them is the hair around the neck.
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  • Mike JMike J Registered Users Posts: 1,029 Major grins
    edited June 28, 2010
    Fabulous lighting. Just great. I agree about the hair around the neck distracting as well as the hair in #1 on her far side.
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  • AgnieszkaAgnieszka Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,263 Major grins
    edited June 28, 2010
    goooooooooorgeous!!!!! WOW!
  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited June 28, 2010
    good stuff! try a vignette on both
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  • Darren Troy CDarren Troy C Registered Users Posts: 1,927 Major grins
    edited June 28, 2010
    Really nice job on that first one! Like the sequins (sp?) on the eye.
  • sweet carolinesweet caroline Registered Users Posts: 1,589 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2010
    oooooooh!
  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2010
    Very lovely shots. I especially like the second one in that it has a little more detail in the back of the head/neck area. Just to point out the judges like to see a little bit of skin on the outside of the far eye. They hate when the eye goes into the bkg. The second shot comes closer to this.
  • PaintguyPaintguy Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
    edited July 1, 2010
    Beautiful shot, but my eyes go right to the distracting disks next to her right eye.
  • tropicotropico Registered Users Posts: 225 Major grins
    edited July 2, 2010
    Wow! This is just amazing. I love everything about it!
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