#54 first thoughts

AndMan

Not doing too well with this one so far.
I'm hoping to get a chance to shoot some other options but in the mean time are any of these worthy?

C&C always appreciated

#1 "Fast food worm"


#2 "Two"


#3 "We want to be alone"

dlscott56

Love the 'fast food' shot Peter.

red_zone

I like the fast food shot, although I'm not sure the title and the image convey a cliche... something more along the lines of "eats like a bird" or "eating like a bird" or some other common expression.

kdotaylor

Yes! Eats like a bird.

Tango

ok here are my guesses...
1. when the chips are down
2. its not you, its me....
3. get a room!

ghinson

Two if by sea?

AndMan

Thanks for the feedback folks, clearly the titles & images don't work as well as I hoped.

#1
Perhaps "Early Bird Special" or "Breakfast - a 21st Century worm"
would better convey the early bird catches the worm (or in this case the crisp/chip).

#2 & #3
Should perhaps both have the title along the lines of "No Third wheel required" to convey what I wanted them to - Two's company, three's a crowd.

Back to the drawing board.

WhatSheSaw

I like Early Bird Special for #1.

Froch

AndMan wrote: »

Thanks for the feedback folks, clearly the titles & images don't work as well as I hoped.

#1
Perhaps "Early Bird Special" or "Breakfast - a 21st Century worm"
would better convey the early bird catches the worm (or in this case the crisp/chip).

#2 & #3
Should perhaps both have the title along the lines of "No Third wheel required" to convey what I wanted them to - Two's company, three's a crowd.

Back to the drawing board.

, #3 cracks me up. I read it as..."get a room".

dnie

Froch wrote: »

, #3 cracks me up. I read it as..."get a room".

, I thought that too.

AndMan

Thanks for the feedback folks, still struggling with a suitable entry but I have a few hours.